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The Saree Behind the Silence — Part 2

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Chapter 20 – The Questions That Hurt

Scene: Cousin's family function – Afternoon

The entire family attends a traditional family celebration.

Ananya wears a beautiful silk saree. Keerthana wears a simple lavender chudidhar with her long hair in a braid.

Initially, everything goes well.

But during lunch, some relatives begin asking uncomfortable questions.

"When are you planning to have children?"

"Your parents are getting older. They want grandchildren."

One relative looks at Keerthana and asks sarcastically:

"Who will bless the children in this family if you two don't have any?"

Keerthana becomes speechless.

She quietly leaves the dining area and walks into the garden.

Padma notices and follows her.

Keerthana: "Why does everyone think our lives are incomplete without children?"

Padma: "People who don't understand your life should not decide its value."

Ananya overhears the conversation.

She approaches the relatives.

Ananya: "Please stop questioning our personal life. We will decide our future ourselves."

The relatives become silent.

For the first time, Ananya openly stands beside Keerthana.

Ending moment: Ananya takes Keerthana's hand and walks back into the function together.

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Discussion (5)

Meghana
Meghana 16 hours ago

One more thing.. A good story with a good visual will always creates a long lasting impression on the readers. Your stories and their images are truly amazing

Meghana
Meghana 16 hours ago

Awesome.. Simply awesome.. Good emotional ride I must say.. Keep writing more sis

Urschinni
Urschinni Author 11 hours ago

Thank you so much Meghana

Rekhamole
Rekhamole 20 hours ago

Omg beautiful story full of emotions family and uniteness including transition and support for that is narrated perfectly... Great story... Keep writing stories like this ... All parts including hair, dressing, transition, love support, acceptance.. good work...

Urschinni
Urschinni Author 18 hours ago

Thank you so much for beautiful words and encouragement. Sure dear I will work on that based on comments.

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