Chapter 24: The Monster in White
The week after Pattamma moved in became a living nightmare for the new Sangeetha.
Pattamma was everything the old stories warned about a strict, traditional, sharp tongued mother in law who believed a daughter in law’s only purpose was to serve her husband and family without question. From the very first day, she took complete control of the house like a dictator in a white saree.
Day 1
The very morning after she arrived, Pattamma sat at the dining table while the new Sangeetha served coffee.
“Why do you need to go to that shop every day?” she asked sharply. “A married woman working outside? What is the need? Your only job is to take care of your husband and this house. Selvam is earning well now. Stay at home and serve him properly.”
The new Sangeetha opened her mouth to protest, but Selvam quickly intervened.
“Amma, times have changed. Let her work if she wants. She has been managing alone for eight years.”
Pattamma grumbled but stayed silent for the moment. However, her eyes promised that this conversation was far from over.
The Bath Incident (Day 3)
On the third day, Pattamma crossed every boundary.
It was 6:30 AM. The new Sangeetha had just entered the bathroom for her morning bath when Pattamma pushed the door open without knocking.
“What is this? Why are you bathing alone? In our tradition, mother-in-law and daughter-in-law should bathe together sometimes. It builds closeness,” she declared.
The new Sangeetha’s face turned pale. “No… Amma… I’m fine alone…”
But Pattamma wouldn’t listen. She locked the door from inside and began removing her own white saree.
Left with no choice, the new Sangeetha stood trembling as she removed her nighty, then her bra and panty. She stood completely naked in front of her mother-in-law.
Pattamma looked at her body critically, then with strange approval.
“Ayyo… look at you,” she said, circling her slowly. “Such fair skin. Heavy breasts, good for feeding babies. Wide hips… perfect for childbirth. Your waist is a little thick, but that’s okay. Selvam will like this body.”
The new Sangeetha wanted to die from shame. She covered her breasts with one arm and her vagina with the other hand, but Pattamma pulled her hands away.
“Don’t be shy. We are family.”
They bathed together under the shower. Pattamma made her apply soap on her back, and in return, she soaped the new Sangeetha’s body, her hands moving over her heavy breasts, squeezing them slightly, running down her soft belly, and even between her thighs. The new Sangeetha stood there like a statue, tears flowing silently as her mother-in-law’s wrinkled hands touched every intimate part of her body.
After bathing, Pattamma made her dry herself in front of her, then helped her dress. She chose a simple cotton saree for her and personally draped it, adjusting the blouse tightly around her breasts, making sure the pallu showed just enough cleavage “to please the husband.”
The entire process was deeply humiliating. The new Sangeetha felt like an object inspected, touched, and dressed like a doll.
Throughout the week, Pattamma filled the house with poisonous traditional talks.
“A good wife should wake up before her husband. She should serve him food first. She should never argue. Her body belongs to her husband. Her thoughts should only be about his happiness.”
She criticized everything the way the new Sangeetha cooked, how she dressed, how much she talked to neighbours, even how she walked.
“You walk like a boy! Swing your hips properly when you walk in front of your husband!”
The Temple Visit (Day 5)
On the fifth day, Pattamma dragged the entire family to the famous Mariamman Temple.
She made the new Sangeetha perform special rituals for her husband’s long life and prosperity, tying sacred threads, breaking coconuts, doing 108 namaskarams, and even carrying a heavy pot of water on her head while walking around the temple. The new Sangeetha’s breasts ached badly from the physical strain. Sweat poured down her body, making her saree stick to her curves. People stared at the “devout wife” performing rituals for her husband.
Selvam watched with pride. The new Prakash watched with deep sympathy and guilt.
Day 7 - The Marriage Announcement
Today was the worst.
Pattamma sat on the sofa like a queen and made a grand announcement.
“We have a family marriage in Coimbatore next week. My sister’s grandson’s wedding. We are all attending as a family. No excuses.”
Selvam immediately agreed. “Yes, Amma. We will all go.”
The new Sangeetha felt trapped. A big marriage meant relatives, questions, more humiliation in heavy sarees, and constant performance as the “loyal wife.”
After dinner, Selvam told her, “Tomorrow morning we are going shopping. I’ll buy you a new outfit for the marriage. You should look the most beautiful there.”
The new Sangeetha could only nod weakly.
That night, after Pattamma went to sleep in the hall, Selvam entered the bedroom again.
The new Sangeetha had changed into a soft white nighty. She tried to lie down on the far edge of the bed, but Selvam pulled her close. He turned her towards him, face to face. His strong arms wrapped around her soft body. He kissed her deeply on the lips, his tongue pushing inside. His hand roamed freely — squeezing her breasts over the nighty, then sliding down to cup her vagina possessively.
He pressed his hardness against her thigh and whispered, “I want you so badly…”
But after a few minutes of heavy breathing and touching, he stopped again.
“Not yet,” he said, kissing her forehead. “Soon… when you’re ready.”
He turned to his side, keeping one arm tightly around her waist, trapping her against his body.
The new Sangeetha lay there in the darkness, tears flowing silently.
Her body was no longer hers.
Her house was no longer hers.
Her life was no longer hers.
And the worst was yet to come.
Discussion (24)
I have mailed you, shared my idea please check
haan, the thing is I've got a lot of stories in the drawing board, so need some breathing space 👉👈 but sure we'll start working after a lil bit of time
Didi your stories are very nice, love your writing style
Awww thank youu 🤍 means a lot to meee
do you have intrest in mitical stories like body swaping,shapeshifing,magical powers like this or alien stories a jelli sudstance like venom takes a human body as host it can provide shape shifting powers that can transform in to any budy like this
ahhh now we are talking!!!, actually I read a story in Anjali crossdressing blog, alas the the website's down RIP 🤧 i think it's a story by a author names manisha or anisha or smtg I'm not sure, i loved that story but it was left unfinished, I'll try to continue that...
When you will release your new store
perhaps next week, currently I'm polishing up my archived personal story, which I'll publish within this week ✨
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If any body like my stories commented below please share your opinion
Mmmmmmm perhaps a different flavour of story, whatchu say, apart from this places swap !?
If you like my two stories.i like if you from start the big story first
Hello ~~ yes I'm working on the neighbours swap story rn, will take some time 👉👈
And another story.......a young married couple will move into their new home and they have a neighbor a couple in their mid forties. And the middle aged woman and and the young women will become bestfriends in just short time of period and they decided to go to trip for one month. But the her old husband will not agree to that.and the young man Is a software engineer working for home he had no problem with their trip idea.but they had a problem because the old woman husband not agree to their plans. So they decided to crossdressing this young man as middle aged married women for one month with a special type of skin suit.that young woman in working in a science laboratory. They will force him to swap places with the old woman. As well as he is working for home so he also agrees for their plans.at one Sunday they all told the old man they are going to move and went to laboratory and swapped their places with a special type of skin suit. And the young women and the middle aged woman who is in the form of the young man will go the trip for one month and enjoy a lot and have sex. The young man in the form of middle aged woman will manning all household works and have romance with her husband and have a wonderful sex all the month
anddd sorry, was a lil busy, life happened 👉👈. I'll do this story first, perhaps if we could communicate through mail, we can do this more collaboratively, chapter by chapter ;-)
A young married couple in their mid twenties resided to spend their honeymoon in his uncles restaurant which is present in munna in kerala. His uncle has two daughters and his wife is dead.uncle daughter runs a beautiparlar.his uncle invited them to the dinner.whine dowing dinner they had conversation.the young man told that he is a good actor. While his uncle told hat he has a business deal next week with a old business man but he tells that the old man is a traditional man that he will not deal with old bachelor like me.if you don't mind any can you act as a wife for me for the meaning day.he asked the couple funnyle the young women felt exited and also said ok for this.after that he will become as a wife for his uncle and attend the meeting.but the old man told them that he want to take a vacation from his business life and spend two months in here.due to this he should stay as a wife for his uncle and mother of two daughters and aunt for his wife. And have sex with his uncle many Times during this two months
I've always wanted to do a keralam based story, mmmmm I'll think about infusing whatever I know about the culture as well ✨
You have written his story very beautifully and exactly. Thanks for doing this
thankies for providing me with the idea. However, I'm not satisfied, i would have loved to collaborate more, each and every chapter, with ur feedback. Hence, for any further endeavours, I've created that Mail id, anyone can approach me through that... 🙏