Chapter 17: The Final Reckoning
The day had finally come.
After months of waiting, gathering, and enduring, I had decided. Today was the day I would end it all.
I woke up early, heart steady but heavy. Karthik and Meera were still sleeping peacefully. I looked at them for a long moment, kissed their foreheads gently, and whispered, “Amma will always protect you.”
Then I began preparing myself.
I chose my favourite dark red silk saree with a rich gold border the same colour I had worn on my wedding day as Mahalaxmi. I draped it with extra care, making the pleats sharp and elegant. Underneath, I wore a dark red lace lingerie set that pushed my full breasts up beautifully. The black mangalsutra with its heavy pendant rested deep in my cleavage, the gold contrasting against my skin. I applied fresh bright red sindoor thickly in my parting, a large round kumkum bindi, heavy kajal, and deep red lipstick.
I put on all my jewellery with deliberate slowness, red glass bangles on each wrist, anklets with loud bells, toe rings, long jhumkas, nose stud, waist chain, and multiple necklaces. The final touch was a string of fresh jasmine flowers in my hair.
I stood in front of the mirror, a beautiful, traditional Tamil wife stared back. No one would ever guess what was about to happen.
Murugan woke up and saw me. His eyes softened with love. He came forward, took the small box of vermillion, and applied a fresh streak on my forehead with his thumb, right above the bindi. Then he gently tucked more jasmine into my hair.
“Today you look like a goddess,” he whispered, his voice full of genuine affection. He made me kneel, placed his hands on my head, and blessed me. “May you always be happy. May our family stay together forever.”
I looked up at him, eyes slightly moist.
If I had been born this way… if life had raised me like this… I might have accepted this happiness.
But I knew the truth. This life was forced upon me. And no matter how sweet it had become, the crimes they committed could not be forgiven.
I touched his feet, stood up, and hugged him tightly for a long moment.
“I will always remember this, husband.”
He smiled, not understanding the finality in my words.
I reached the main villa by 11 a.m.
Charu was waiting for me near the back entrance. We hugged tightly. She looked nervous but determined.
“Everything is ready, akka,” she whispered. “The final files were sent to NIA at 10 a.m. They are already on their way.”
I nodded. “Stay safe. Stay with the children. I will handle the rest.”
I went inside and started cooking, a special lunch, as if it was any other normal day. The aroma of sambar, fish fry, and ghee rice filled the house.
Vinu, Lata, Sujata, and the three men (the same ones who had raped Charu) were all gathered in the living room, laughing and drinking. They had no idea this was their last day of freedom.
I served them food with a soft smile, pallu adjusted low, bangles chiming. They treated me like furniture, the loyal maid who had become part of the family.
“Mahalaxmi, bring more rice,” Vinu ordered lazily.
“Yes, madam.”
I kept serving, heart steady.
At 1:47 p.m., the main door burst open with a loud bang.
“NIA! Nobody move! Hands up!”
More than twenty officers in black uniforms rushed in with guns drawn. The room descended into chaos. Vinu screamed. Lata tried to run. The three men reached for weapons but were immediately tackled. Murugan, who had just returned home, was pushed against the wall.
I acted perfectly, screaming in fear, crying loudly, falling to my knees in the middle of the hall.
“No! What is happening?! Please don’t take my family!”
The officers didn’t touch me or Charu. To them, we were just the innocent maids.
Murugan looked at me with pure panic as they cuffed his hands behind his back.
“Mahalaxmi! Take care of the children! I will come back! I promise!”
I ran to him, still crying, holding Karthik’s hand and carrying little Meera. He bent down with bound hands and hugged all three of us tightly.
“I love you… all of you…” he whispered, voice breaking. “Take care of our family.”
I kissed his cheek, tears flowing freely.
The officers pulled him away.
I stood at the entrance of the villa I once owned, holding my son by one hand and my daughter in the other, watching as all of them ,Vinu, Lata, Sujata, Murugan, and the three men ,were dragged into police vans.
The sirens faded into the distance.
I stood there for a long time, the afternoon sun warm on my face, my dark red saree fluttering slightly in the breeze. My glass bangles were still. My mangalsutra felt heavier than ever against my chest.
I looked down at the gold pendant, now slightly wet with my tears.
It is done.
The revenge was complete.
They would never come out. The evidence was airtight. Terrorist links, human trafficking, money laundering, rape, murder conspiracy everything. Life sentences. Possibly death penalty for some.
And yet…
I felt no pure joy.
Only a strange emptiness.
I turned around, adjusted my pallu, and walked back inside the villa with my two children.
The house was mine again.
But the woman who walked in it was no longer Monish.
She was Mahalaxmi.
And for now… she still had a family to raise.
Discussion (33)
Jerusha ji, your stories are always superb. So also this story. The deeper we read your stories the higher we will be in the STOREYS of JOY. Wish many more scores of stories from .
That's a huge motivation to me, ma'am. To get compliments from you, damnn I'm blessed ✨
How to write a story, i cant able to find option to start a new one. Please guide me.
Hello, oooo a new writer, exciting! ~. So the first thing is make sure when u started the account, you opted as writer, not as a reader. If u did as a reader, won't be able to publish stories. In a writer's account, click on the three lines in the top right corner, click on your name, in the down list, "Create Story" will be available ! (≧▽≦)
After completing this story I will tell you my new story. You will definitely like it
When you will release your new store
When you are going to release your new store
If you want means I have lots of ideas I will share with you if you want
Sure, I'll attach the mail id at the end of the next story.
I think you are so fashionable in story writing
Thankiesss 👉👈
My Instagram id is rohith.6360 did you completed the story completely
haan, perhaps I'll create a mail id or something and regarding the story, I'm working on it, a few tweaks here and there, I've named it Mother of Me. Not entirely forced, I made it to be more realistic and a grounded storyline. I hope you'll enjoy it 😌
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👉👈 ummm about that, i'mma bit sceptical about my digital footprint... Perhaps @meghana akka can facilitate smtg 😌